Shaam chugali kar rahi hai,
Raat se sautan ki tarah jhagad rahi hai,
Subah alhada si, akeli baithi hai,
Dopahar to vaise bhi mujhse khafa hai,
Kis kis ka saath doon,
Kahan se nikalun vakt
24 ghante kam padte hain...
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sirji khayal to aapke hamesha hi badhiya hote hain....
aur lagta hai yeh aapki waqti-haalaat ko ujaagar karti hai...
maine socha (sorry about that) ki last ki teen lines ke pehle yeh char lines baith jaayengi, so bhej raha hoon
Raat se sautan ki tarah jhagad rahi hai,
Subah alhada si, akeli baithi hai,
Dopahar to vaise bhi mujhse khafa hai,
kyun yeh waqt adhura sa lagta hai
kyun hamesha pura nahi padta
har koshish yun hi beh jaati hai
adjustments mein reh jaati hai
(I couldn't think of apt word to replace adjustments in hindi:(so much for puritanism)
Kis kis ka saath doon,
Kahan se nikalun vakt
24 ghante kam padte hain...
Arrey...bahot badhiya..Ise kehte hain value addition..chalo isko add karke poora bana denge...Thanks a lot.
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